363. Am Currently Out Of My Mind Poem by Jaden Knight

363. Am Currently Out Of My Mind



Am currently out of my mind
so please feel free to leave me a message
it's not clear when I'll be coming back
or if I want to return

leave your opinions after the tone
and I might be bothered to listen
if it's too boring I'll erase them from memory
I don't need your rubbish too

Don't sit around on my doorstep
as I might have to use the window
breaking in to one's own head is a stupid idea
but I don't want you catching my thoughts

Am currently out of my mind
so please feel free to leave me a message
I'm not sure I will come back for now
am too busy having my fun

Tuesday, November 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 06 November 2016

indeed humorous! ! ! ! i 'love' it. maybe as much as a triple banana split with double the fudge, marshmallow spread, strawberry jam, and butterscotch sauce! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! favorite (of many) lines: breaking in to one's own head is a stupid idea but I don't want you catching my thoughts.........that is priceless! the wording i mean, not the breaking. this shall soon be the second poem placed in Section B of November's 'a showcase for PH poets, found on my site, listed as a 'poem' about Section B November. Thanks Profanisaurus. :) :) bri ;) also to MyPoemList

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