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You thought you were free
But you are chained
Once and again

To a life where the gain
Can't catch up to the pain
A year of fortune
Is lost to the torture

A great roller coaster of victories and falls
And quite honestly seriously fun
Falls victim to a Waterloo of ignorance
And in the end it's to decide between a trip and a gun

Julie Smith

Friday, March 3, 2017

Topic(s) of this poem: life,age,fortune,fun,torture,victim,gun,love,love and life,memories

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An age where things happen you never thought possible. The greatest things and the worst things. And just when you think you got it good you lose everything again you fought for

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 March 2017

ur just 23 all by now know hence your poem is fresh also do read and reply comments if you wish to do so

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