20 Sun Sets In The Morning Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

20 Sun Sets In The Morning

Rating: 5.0


Dark are my nights.
As sun sets in the morning
Darker are my days.

Tuesday, December 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: melancholy,Pain,love,apocalypse
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was scribbled by me at a time of extreme sorrow, years back, when I felt my sun setting right before my eyes. I laid hands on it, while fudging through one of my ancient notes and thought, would share those tragic moments on ph.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 29 May 2023

Simply excellent.....thank u, dear poet....

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How do I express my gratitude to you, dear poet?

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Susan Williams 30 March 2023

worth a galaxy of mourning stars

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my fingers typed these lines at a time when I was going through a very difficult phase. My entire family. Whenever I read these lines, I feel reliving those days.

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Susan Williams 30 March 2023

that sorrow reached out from the words of this poem and made me catch my breath at the pain and the perfect visual symbol for it---a sun setting in the morning--- this is a piece of great writing, my friend

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Thank you Susie. My agonies would have been nothing, compared to what you endure. May God be with you, Susie

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Amber Piercy 11 January 2023

For being a short poem this one holds a lot of emotions

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Thank You for the appreciation

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Poet Amber Piercy has added this poem to her favourites. Thank You, my dear poet

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Rob Lamberton 30 December 2022

It is a dark day when the sun sets in the morning. When Mt St. Helen's blew I remember the sun being shut out in the morning by clouds of falling ash that darkened the whole day. The effects were lasting! An emotional Mt. St. Helen's is just as lasting! I've been there!

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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