(147) Song Song Go Away! Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(147) Song Song Go Away!

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A stupid song plays inside my head
When I try to write a poem
It pushes back all the thoughts and lines
It clutters up my mind with foam
It’s always a song that I dislike
Probably what my sister was listening to on TV
And now the contagious song bug
Has been passed from her to me
My head is going round and round
Oh god! Please stop now
The song in my head is so loud
It makes me want to say ow!
You want me to write a poem?
Do my homework? Write an essay?
I’m sorry I can’t help you until
The song in my head goes away
It clings to you like a hairnet
And doesn’t let go till the next day
When another song drops by your head for a visit
Mind you, it’s not there just to say hey!
It means to play itself again and again
Till you are completely under its power
And it will grow so loud and painful
It’ll drive you up the tower
What’s the point, I just can’t concentrate
I am unable to write anything
I might as well give up
And listen to my head sing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pandian Angelina 11 July 2009

Yeah! we all go thro' the line running in our mind syndrome, irritating like a flea buzzing, you have expressed so well the feeling, in simple but strong words, the passion with which you write is really so nice and the personal touch of bringing your sister into the picture you paint - Good! I like your innocent and open approach in your poems, be a child for some more years Risha and help us remember the child in us! Angel

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Sandhya S N 08 July 2009

Risha kutty.... Fine write You expressed in very brilliant words which many had felt before... regards sandhya

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Mamta Agarwal 24 June 2009

i have felt like this many times, a song, la few lines keep on running in the mind without permission like a stuck record. well expressed Risha 10 Mamta

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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