(142) Five Elements Poem by premji premji

(142) Five Elements

Rating: 2.7


Dream starts...

Troubled sea....night
Twister arises with intense power...
We are struggling in the mid-seas...
In a ship without anchor...
Soon deep buried in a whirlpool.....

Dream continues....

Naked like careless children,
We walk through hoarfrost....
Trapped in an avalanche...
We dissolve...

Dream continues....

We look into the fuming mouth of
A huge volcano...
Like moths, we vanish....
We burn.....we diffuse....

Dream continues....

We travel like two ants...
Flying up on a huge kite,
Without any control.....
We sit in the vortex of a twister.....
The earth is vanished from vision....

Tell me,
Who are you?
Fire? Air? or Water?

The sand underneath your footstep....

Dream finishes.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema(Aanamika) 80 08 July 2009

Excellent poem, loved it...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 June 2009

Excellent poem, excellent idea.

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Micron 26 June 2009

we are all under the influence of the elements - but often forget this - great poem loved it hugs micron

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rago rago 26 June 2009

let the five elements rule us......... rather than asking questions? ....... well penned...

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