' 10000 Questions ' Poem by Ency Bearis

' 10000 Questions '

Rating: 3.3


Who can perceive self
in front of a mirror
exploring your anima?

Who can perceive our fate
as life is about beyond
expectations?

There's no ambassador from God
or His emissary to our destiny.
Otherwise we trespass the divine field,
flaunting what lay to our fate.

But we come moving of nothingness
and we move on with patience,
challenging the game of fortuity.
Praise ourselves we move on
and survive everyday.

And exploring thoroughly
the chances to live, with
ten thousand questions


to our destiny



Ency Bearis
(c) copyright 2012

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 25 March 2012

Bravo! Powerful and thought provoking write that do not surprise me at all since I have read many of your stunning and touching works, mostly on PF. I always love and enjoy t read cleaver and intelligently written poems and in the Poetry World, you are not the exception! You are a natural born poet and your works give you away for the whole world to know! I am so glad to see you again in this wonderful site! 10+++ well deserved! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Your friend, Romeo from NYC....

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Wahab Abdul 25 March 2012

''There's no ambassador from God or His emissary to our destiny. Otherwise we trespass the divine field, flaunting what lay to our fate.'' very thought provoking and very philosophical.......a brilliant saying i like it.

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Pheko Motaung 25 March 2012

Magnificent! This poem is a true masterpiece and a classic and a work of fantastic philosophical brilliance! You're wonderful.God bless you.

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O.o. W 25 March 2012

Very good emotional piece! Great topic to any readers, inspiration'starts with 10000? s Thank you for the nice comment on Garden days

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Kumar Parashar 26 March 2012

And exploring thoroughly the chances to live, with ten thousand questions truly remarkable.....

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Jennifer Chalk 02 April 2012

What a perfect piece to a perfect peace, a true philosophy and a fantastic poem. Thank you!

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Wabi Sabi 28 March 2012

it's encouraging. I need to keep this in my mind. thanks for sharing! !

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yellowbell alamanda 28 March 2012

wow! that's very true, we're always have questions..even God being question for the future, for our fate..but destiny is not being prepared, simply the fruit of our act. for a thousand questions, there's always one answer..find it out. :) very intelligent piece! thanks for sharing.

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Joy A 26 March 2012

fantastic poem! , .very true, .with the chances to live with the ten thousand questions.

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Adeline Foster 26 March 2012

Ah, but has not the true God provided for us sixty-six quite involved letters for our enlightenment? Could not these be his ambassadors? I venture to say He has not left anything to fate but those who are bogged in fate only ignore His attempts to instruct and assure us. That said, the poem is well written. I do appreciate poetry that is composed with attention to spelling and grammar. Read mine – Cicatrix – Adeline

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