1 Week Poem by Julie Smith

1 Week

Rating: 5.0


I think of the day
When you were all mine
It feels like a much longer time
Than one week ago today
Maybe it was my last chance but I made it
And still you're like a string that is not to be cut
Tied around my neck, but I'm not afraid yet
As long as I keep my mouth shut
Tightening every time I try to pull you closer
Can't let it slip through my hands, no way you chose her
Can never be sure of my victory
Your love is pure, you act contradictory
But I'd rather suffocate with you choking me
Than living a dead life with no reason to be

Friday, November 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: reunion,second chance love,true love,week,love,memories,remember
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Yes, one more about the guy I can't live without ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naima Ansari 04 November 2016

A beautiful poem of one-sided love.Your lines depict the depth of pain. Keep writing and completing this love in your verses😄

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