(041) Commitments Poem by premji premji

(041) Commitments

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Dear,
One who is committed,
can't be a poet!
Can you hide anything
before the eyes of a poet?
Something impossible,
because he can visualize
anything through the open
windows of the mind!

Commitments will put
you and me in chains
once again!
(Though we are in chains already!)

One who is committed
will end up with
a narrowed mind,
could see the beauty,
read your mind partially,
can't be genuine
and innocent!

Dear,
But I am committed
only to your love!


06.02.96

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandhya S N 25 June 2009

Can a committed lover read mind fully? can be genuine and innocent? Who knows?

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Kesav Easwaran 06 June 2008

committed and still a poet! good... let the commitment gets the top priority! a good work, premji...

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