013. The Damage Of War Poem by Jaden Knight

013. The Damage Of War

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I lie on the scarred battle field
with bloodied arms and legs
listening to the whistling of the shells
the explosions rock the ground

I see my comrades around me
lying unmoving on the mud
my feeble cries for help
land on deaf ears

The sound of whirring wakes me
a man in a white over coat
moves slowly closer
holding out his hand
as if at a meeting

I wake again
along and in a bed
the doctor comes in to see me
his pale face shows sorrow

As I stand alone in the rain
by the big stone monument
I shed a tear and think
how close it was
for one of them
to be me

Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
First one of the year 2000 if i remember correctly. Was actually seen in a dream before it was written
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alesia Leach 28 September 2014

A sad poem. I loved it. If was about you or someone you know hope everyone is ok. Thank you

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