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01 And The Moon And The Stars And The World
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long walk at night
the breeze freezes my spirit
the moon warms it up
pulling at my poetic soul
the crickets sing their poems to the night
a million other insects contribute their share
to loosen up the night
for lovers, husbands and wives
while a tide of words too
creeps in all directions in my mental sphere
saturates the poetic bar of the intellect
waiting to be strummed into verses
the rhythm swims along with them
as i write out verse by verse
the moon my friend shares its light
the night wind inspires
lovelorn stars wave all the way
a million light years away
heralding the birth of a song
sparkling, twinkling
guided by intricate orchestration of the night
before gracing the written page
long walk in the night
even the insects with the lamps
start to lend me their lights
between the twinke of the stars
they dance, sing, beat out a dance
john tiong chunghoo
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Rafique Farooqi
(9/21/2009 10:44:00 AM) |
a wonderful write, i am highly impressed by your works,
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Indira Renganathan
(4/29/2009 1:19:00 AM) |
What a wonderful descriptive work...before the night walk is over a poem born with all the night's harmonies10++++++++
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Kate Chandler Flynn
(12/19/2008 4:18:00 PM) |
Hello John... it is wonderful to read you again after such a long time... thank you for telling me (via Poetry Shared) where to find you ... you will know from what I have written in the past that this poem of yours would appeal to me on many different levels... should you care to catch up, please email me at kate_chandler_flynn@hotmail.co.uk... I remain, as ever, one of your most admiring fans... it is an honour to read your work... Kate
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Paul Josef B.
(12/15/2008 12:02:00 PM) |
The first five lines are fantastic!
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James Foulk
(11/21/2008 2:38:00 PM) |
such a beautiful piece of well written poetry
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Patricia Gale
(9/12/2008 12:56:00 PM) |
Wonderful imagery..... seen through a poet's words.
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Ada Shelley
(9/11/2007 4:12:00 AM) |
Very nice......I loved the language
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Luis Gil
(4/3/2007 4:21:00 PM) |
May this walk be long...... Good poem, John. Thanks
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~Just Nik~
(5/23/2006 4:58:00 PM) |
The only word that can to my mind was WOW!
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