0013.♥ Love Or Hate ♥ Poem by Sunset Moonshine

0013.♥ Love Or Hate ♥



You say that you love me
You say that you hate me
If you can't make up your mind
Then so it be.

Don't you see
That i need to know
Love or hate
Tell me then I'll go.

Don't be a hater
If you say you love me
If you really want to be a lover
Then show me so i can see.

Don't hide how you really feel
Tell me right now, right here
Tell what is the big deal
I need to know so dropp that beer.

Love or hate
It's not hard just pick one
Then I'll walk away
And you'll be done.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Good-guy Lost 24 April 2009

wow this poem rly speaks to me, see, ive had experience with girls (guys in ur case obv lol) that dont say what they think, or that play mind games cuz they're not sure how they rly feel.... nicely written and very moving. keep it up, and thanks for the comments =)

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Stacey Watts 23 December 2008

Very strong piece. Nice job!

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i like the repetitive theme of love and hate, simple and easy to follow nice piece thankyou for commenting on my poem by the way take care :)

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