Question. Poem by Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.

Question.



I followed her too work this morning
just to make sure she
got there o.k.

Then I picked her up at lunch
so she'd have nobody
disturbing her
while she ate.

The I walked her too the pub
for her evening drink
where she joked and laughed
with her friends.

Then I made sure she got home o.k.
in her drunken state
as she caught the last bus
and I sat
2 seats behind.

Now tell me.

Am I in love?

Or am I a stalker?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Daly 05 October 2006

This is a very imaginative construct. The flow is great and has a deadpan humour to it. I like the way that you use a conversational approach to this. It strengthen the impact of it.

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Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
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