She May Have A Point. Poem by Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.

She May Have A Point.

Rating: 5.0


If you listen
to Nostradamus
then today is the day
that the Anti-Christ
comes,
to bring
the end of man
and
darkness to the World.

And
if you listen
to my
ex

I'm
already
here....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maggie Just May 06 June 2006

I wasn't mad on the earlier one Sherrie name-checked as I thought it could do with a lot of tightening up. However, this piece is contained and witty. Good use of the title to bolster the sentiment of the poem too. Not enough people consider how a title may function.

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What spunk you have! This is hysterical.

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***** ********* 06 June 2006

I would rather consider it a day when the world as we know it ends Neil and as your ex has probably been telling you, love is the new norm. Now that is a point to remember. Let us pray! Grinning at you, no trousers, just a neat little pair in short, lol Good poem, straight from the honest neils heart. who could ask for more? Tai

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Joyce Chelmo 06 June 2006

To be honest I have to wonder myself. Even pshychics can't see the world past 2026

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Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
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