Lonely Teardrops Poem by Bradley Lester

Lonely Teardrops



Lonely teardrops
Salty taste
Aching heart
Loving waste
Saddened soul
Teary eyes
Trembling hands
Darkened skies
Unkissed lips
Shadow walk
Monday blues
Silent talk
Knotted stomach
Tasteless food
Chapped dry lips
Angered mood
Sobbing features
Crouching pain
Beaten heart
Losing gain
Shattered dreams
Crumbling love
Left to gutter
Blackened dove

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

ideas are set so poetically.. all vocab breathe the theme..mood, tone, fine..to ponder on..10+++++

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Shagun Khera 10 June 2009

quite precise....appereciate the brevity of the poem... two words for the descriptions.. nice..

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Bradley Lester

Bradley Lester

Western Cape, Cape Town
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