.jealousy Poem by Vidyadhar Durgekar

.jealousy

Rating: 4.6


Jealousy haunts golden lily,
Watching the riverside lady,
Angelic ebullient eyes unwary
Of the orchids stare and envy;

Rose no match for pink lips,
Nor it’s dangling stocks,
Nearest to her comely hips,
Nor the swaying buttocks;

Lotus feels quail and nervous,
Whenever lady is amorous,
As her cheek turns rosy pink,
Making lotus flinch and shrink

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Basipo Mzila-ndlovu 11 June 2008

...imaginative...wonder what inspired it...neat, provoking lines...we never fully appreciate who we are because we want what others have... -angelic ebullient, good choice of words too...its a 10

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Rebekah Gamble 11 June 2008

This seems unfinished.

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Hana K 11 June 2008

nice poem agree with Rebekah Gamble it seems unfinished but thanks for inform me

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Melvin Banggollay 11 June 2008

no doubts, this is one of the most wonderful poem i have read. it has the rhythm of the wind and the rhyme of a beating heart. a 10 for this brother. thanks, melvin

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C. P. Sharma 11 June 2008

Isn't she Spencer's Fairie Queen!

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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

lol! ! very nice........

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Anjali Sinha 11 July 2008

nice poem. metamorphic and picturesque--complete with lily, orchid, rose and lotus. 10 points to you

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Mamta Agarwal 27 June 2008

lovely, great metaphor 10for this picturesque piece of writing,

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Moushumi moushumi 16 June 2008

we could continue on & on. But that's the stop point to be mesmerised by this poem where it stops. A great metaphor still haunts me without any word to say...pl keep on sharing such poems for me.

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Neha Aradhye 15 June 2008

ekdam sahi... :) :) :)

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