I Looked At You Poem by Eric Cockrell

I Looked At You

Rating: 5.0


i looked at you,
and saw the fugitive
in my mirror.
i looked at me,
and saw the child in you.
i looked at God,
and saw the stranger waiting.
i looked at the stranger,
and saw my brother in need.
i looked at freedom,
and saw the bars of the cell.
i looked at the bars,
and saw my spirit walk free.
i looked at anger,
and saw forgiveness waiting.
i looked at forgiveness,
and saw the hands of love.
i looked at my body,
and saw the bird leaving the nest.
i looked at the nest,
and saw a world made of straw.
i looked at today,
and saw the scars of yesterday.
i looked at yesterday,
and saw the dawning of tomorrow.
i looked at the seed,
and saw the plant in fullness.
i looked at fullness,
and saw emptiness the seed.
i looked at you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 20 March 2012

wow...really superb flow and continuation of ideas. Brilliant -SG

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 20 March 2012

Superb poem, , , i looked at yesterday and saw the dawning of tomorrow...

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Dave Walker 19 March 2012

A really wonderful poem, a great write.

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Hans Vr 19 March 2012

Very nice and enjoyable poem. A super 10

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