Fox Poem by Fox Nekitsune

Fox

Rating: 3.9


I rush through the trees
I hear them hunting me
from them i flee
Is this the end of me?

Between the rocks
down the stream
home is near

I hear them hunting me
Their snarling teeth
Their killing breath
How can this be

Between the rocks
down the stream
home is near

They bite at me
I cry from their hate
How can this be
And now as a fox i am late

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Didier Saidi 22 November 2011

i like this, i like the story, i think you should had made it a lil longer to let me see more of what happened, but this is good, i enjoyed it

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Tiffany Miller 27 April 2008

dis was really good u should write one about a small little lost white wolf

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