Carnival Poem by Matt Mooney

Carnival

Rating: 5.0


The half moon begins its harvest climb;
This night is sure to be as bright as day.
The turf fires kindle and flame into life
In the hillside homes this evening time.

From across the racecourse and the river
Carnival sounds drift in the still cool air
And rainbow rows of festive lights in town
Send up a crowning glow that spreads
And floods the gently sloping fields afar.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 15 November 2010

This is a beauty, Matt. So rich in texture and fine images. Splendid.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 11 June 2010

Metaphor festivity galore…into the ‘Into’ of Carnival [noetic] …thanks Sir… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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John Oconnell 14 May 2010

This one warms the cockles of the heart. Further comment would spoil its perfection. Thanks! John

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Patti Masterman 05 August 2009

I love the language in here, I can hear the carnival and see the lights. Reminds me of Balboa in California. I've only been there twice; but there is a little ferris wheel all lit up at night, beside the ocean; it has a surreal feeling to it. Sort of little and homey and spacious all at the same time.

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Matt Mooney

Matt Mooney

South Galway, Ireland.
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