Blue Pastures Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Blue Pastures

Rating: 5.0


Dark clouds neigh
grazing the sun
On blue pastures.
They don't rain,
Lest the black stain
From their hide
Gets washed away,

Lest the
White lies
Under the
Dark veils
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 April 2022

I enjoyed the wonderful imagery of this beautiful poem.

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It is a pleasure to read your comments, dear Evelyn.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 January 2023

The white lies often rain more. Intelligent poem writing

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Exquisite rejoinder. A poem in itself, Kesav. Thank You.

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White lies under dark veils…

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My rejoinders to the comments of LeeAnn and Rebecca have disappeared. Would someone help me recover them

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Rebecca Navarre 24 April 2022

Very poetic! .. With powerful message to reflect within! .. Definite 10+++++++++

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Loved the beautiful words of yours. Thank You, Becca.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 April 2022

I love the imagery

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LeeAnn has a great heart, which always flow to me in a stream of affection, in support of my poetic endeavour

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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