Blackout Poem by nimal dunuhinga
Blackout
I cannot see anybody in the total darkness
and if dying is much better.
But this is a temporary loss of consciousness.
Their screams faintly I hear.
'Oh! my darling you should take me with you
and why you left me alone in this hollow world? '
Spouse's voice.
'Oh! Daddy we lost our best friend
and we planned to go on a picnic with you
but you left early? ' Children cried.
'Oh! this man died leaving four months arrears
and I lent him such a big amount.
I am a fool and how I know this fellow will die so soon? '
Householder murmured.
Astutely expressed....well orchestrated language, here, Nimal....Inventively amusing, as it touches h' darkside, amusingly...; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; FJR
A bit lighthearted and amusing. Also a bit sad to wake up and have to face the reality once again. There is wisdom in your poem as well as wit. Warm regards, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 9:22:18 PM # 1.0.0.1119
The feeling comes through with this piece Nimal and you have the abillity to merge and display many styles Thankyou Love duncan X