Your Unconditional Love Poem by Paul Sebastian

Your Unconditional Love



Your Unconditional Love
By Paul Sebastian

Your heart strains and listens
To my heart's ebb and flow
Of impatient tides of feelings
Rushing upon your heart's shore
Absorbing my trust- flow, embracing
Your love, to calm, peace to reassure
To still the troubled sea within
Your embalming love rest my very core
By your unconditional loving
Making me strong, when my ebb's low

Your Unconditional Love
Saturday, September 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,unconditional love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arupam Maity 06 September 2016

...........Of impatient tides of feelings/Rushing upon your heart's shore...I like these two lines most I would also like to hear your valuable comments about my poem posted here.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 September 2016

That's a superb romantic poem with fine use of the sea metaphor. Enjoyed reading it as it is very poetic. Nice to read from u again, pls do comment my latest poem on eclipse too.

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