Treasure Island

clayton moore


Your Like A Ocean


Your eyes are like a ocean,
Your hiar is the waves that lift the ocean,
Your heart is the core of the animal ocean that feels it up with love for the lovely ocean
Your ful of emotion for your own ocean
Your smile just lights the ocean
By the night it calm and quite even the oceans getting so bright by the day and soul is quite
You will be mine tonight
Me and you can sit by the ocean and you are so close to a ocean as I can get and I love you just like a ocean me and you toghether and the ocean's flour will be your blanket for you.

Submitted: Thursday, November 13, 2008
Edited: Thursday, August 04, 2011

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  • Dick Muncher (4/7/2013 7:28:00 PM)

    The ammount of grammatical mistakes in this poem makes it very hard to concentrate on the poem itself. Please revise this poem and your grammatical skills before considering posting again. (Report) Reply

  • Calico Jack (4/23/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    hey buddy, I believe your title should be You're Like an Ocean just in the name of grammar purely, but other than that it was a good read :) (Report) Reply

  • M.j. Henderson (8/3/2011 8:08:00 PM)

    i really enjoyed reading this poem.
    it made me smile and thats hard to do these days.
    thank you you have real talent (Report) Reply

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