Your Family Is Your Responsibility. Be Responsible! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Your Family Is Your Responsibility. Be Responsible!



Our village roads are not tarred and concreted,
Red soiled paths leveled and polished by our foot prints,
Our Highways are better, but built by the foreigners,
The town roads are the worst with potholes and hanging wires,
Someone dig the roads for something and leave it,
The people of India walk on the roads as it is,
The way to live the life, in the pitiful style and manner,
Everyone speaks, everyone knows, but no one bothers,
Summer is the time for the nuclear plant of universe to scotch,
At the people of India, who live in huts and slums,
Less than eight feet high to keep the house cool,
Dried Thatched roof allow the rain and light,
People gather the disposed plastics to seal and hide,
Persistent sun rays pierce through the plastic sheets,
Life is not tough for the people who have these abode,
As they have no time to think and cry of their grief,
When the tough life is the real life for them and many,
Tougher they are, to face the challenging destiny,
People on the roads, sea of heads walk with a purpose,
I do not know what that purpose is, but everyone busy,
India is one of the countries, where people struggle to survive,
Not the survival properly planned and implemented,
IT and computers have changed our landscape,
High rises are seen here and there in Metro and Cosmo,
Prices of the land escalated as high as Everest,
We have joined the elite group of nuclear war fare,
But Indians, who work in India, can't own a residence,
Scarcity of water, electricity and stress, is abundant,
No one force us to follow, but the rituals are followed,
With utter obedience and our strength gets strengthened.
Our Men love their female folks and our women too,
Squabble may occur in a relationship, but not in our family unit,
The parents of India strive hard to keep this unit unbroken,
Our children grow to mature to follow the same unshaken.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

In India family bonds are stronger than anything else and as pure as water despite corruption and exploitation...... A brilliant piece indeed

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Valsa George 11 July 2012

, A very realistic picture of India! We cannot hush up the grim realities. Despite corruption and vioence, our family ties remain more or less intact! That's indeed a silver lining in the cloud! ! A nice Write!

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The Reader 08 July 2012

Very strong & honest record! remedy & reformation get possible only when diagnosed accurately...and no one can be an honest diagnostician but a sensitive poet...

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 July 2012

yes, You are right. Shall we call it 'exposure'? I do not know where the Indian parents have failed, when their children misbehave while they are on their own. The younger generation consent for mutual separation, even for trivial reasons, as both husband and wife are over stressed without much help available in their adapted countries and moreover those who are naturalized, too proud to call themselves as the citizens of the countries that they stay, they may follow the culture of those countries. They are no more Indians legally, but to us, they are still our brothers and sisters and want them to follow our healthy culture.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 July 2012

Very good picture of my India. Congratulation. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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