Your Burdens, My Sorrows Poem by Alen Alexander

Your Burdens, My Sorrows

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You tell me that you’re in sorrow
And I try consoling you
But it couldn’t work out, you said
So did I when I was in such a state, ain’t I true?

You say I couldn’t understand
But tell me where did I fail?
Wait give me a chance
Cause when you came to aid me then, did I complain?

In pain, yes I know how you feel
Cause long before you the one who suffered was me
I care, I like you a lot
It hurts me again more than how it had been

You better not go away and isolate yourself
Saying that only now silence will help
Cause am there with you like the moon
Leading your way having the darkness dealt

Its my wound that hurts now it keeps growing more
Seeing my loved ones, living a life that’s so sore
Believe me let me walk right by your side
All the probs are gonna go, cause ur now a part of my life!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 March 2010

Its my wound that hurts now it keeps growing more Seeing my loved ones, living a life that’s so sore Believe me let me walk right by your side All the probs are gonna go, cause ur now a part of my life.tru emancipation of thoughts from pure mind and it is how the true love os to be reciprocated with... nice poem dear.....10 read mine a parallel or no... i miss... mary to marry

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Mona Martinez 14 September 2009

aawww! ! ! ! ! sounds very sweet.

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Noha El3wdy 05 June 2009

In pain, yes I know how you feel Cause long before you the one who suffered was me wooooow thats just great.

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Toni Bellanger 02 June 2009

Only a good person could write such a sweet poem.

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