Wishes In The Rain Poem by Alen Alexander

Wishes In The Rain

Rating: 5.0


sitting by my books
not bothered about them
I was just so stuck
in thoughts about you!

i saw from the window
it was raining
it kept me wondering
whether it was your love or God's caring

late in the night where the young moon keeps its shine
i see it as you... also my cloud's silver line
out in the rain i want to be with you
wouldnt it b great, if it could be true!

but how can i be so sure dat u love me
after all you never gave me a yes
quietly you stood away
just making me anxious n worried

not knowing where you were
but it did give me the pleasant feeling
jus like the rain drenching away
my thirst which yet is never quenched

when i got to see you, talk to you and so on...
i still wonder whether all the time
i give in for you, thinking about you, living for you
is worth the hope tht one day

i'll have you by my side, when you'll be loving me too
just like awaiting the rain hoped for
to wash away my pain and bring forth my love...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

truly beautiful poem with berautif images and thoughts..10++++

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Mona Martinez 14 September 2009

i loved it. everything you said was true and heartfelt.

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just like awaiting the rain hoped for to wash away my pain and bring forth my love... ...what an imagination with rain's arrival for God.....10 read mine o, lord...raindelay.. rain has come and merci, o rain god

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 June 2009

Its so sad but brilliant, dreamers often get distracted from thing i should know i am a dreamer!

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Eyan Desir 05 June 2009

Good write.........................

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Toni Bellanger 02 June 2009

The wording was so natural, and the poem was so sad and heartfelt.

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