You Rush With A Sword (Haiku Poem) Poem by Panayiota (Julie) Tsorou

You Rush With A Sword (Haiku Poem)

Rating: 4.8


You rush with a sword
then you conquer my own soul
offering flowers.



Tu fonces par l'épée
et puis tu conquiers mon âme
mais tu m ' offres des fleurs.



Με σπαθί ορμάς
κουρσεύεις την ψυχή μου
άνθη την κερνάς.

You Rush With A Sword (Haiku Poem)
Friday, January 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Haiku poem about love.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Howard Savage 16 January 2016

He who rushes with the sword shall one day get stucketh. Good poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 January 2016

then you conquer my own soul offering flowers. flowers and sword....... very nice haiku. thank you. tony

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A lovely haiku on love, with strong but also tender verse. Ten points with honours! !

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A lovely Haiku poem, both dynamic and tender! ! Ten points with honours!

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Fabrizio Frosini 01 January 2016

nice composition, Julie, but I'd say it's a senryu, more than a haiku WELCOME AT P.H. and.. Χρόνια Πολλά

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