You rush with a sword
then you conquer my own soul
offering flowers.
Tu fonces par l'épée
et puis tu conquiers mon âme
mais tu m ' offres des fleurs.
Με σπαθί ορμάς
κουρσεύεις την ψυχή μου
άνθη την κερνάς.
then you conquer my own soul offering flowers. flowers and sword....... very nice haiku. thank you. tony
A lovely haiku on love, with strong but also tender verse. Ten points with honours! !
A lovely Haiku poem, both dynamic and tender! ! Ten points with honours!
nice composition, Julie, but I'd say it's a senryu, more than a haiku WELCOME AT P.H. and.. Χρόνια Πολλά
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
He who rushes with the sword shall one day get stucketh. Good poem.