You Lied Poem by A.J. McKinley

You Lied

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You Lied
Words cascaded effortlessly from a forked tongue
I was naïve to consider you pure

You Lied
Eyes that never spoke anything but broken dreams
My trust was never so fleeting

You Lied
Remorse was a thought forgotten once heard
My mistakes laid plain before others

You Lied
You smiled as worthless promises fell from your lips
I believed because I needed truth

You Lied
Whispers of love as we kissed in soft candlelight
I must have been such easy prey

You Lied
Because you could
And I believed

Copyright 2006 A.J. McKinley

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 28 February 2007

I did not lie you misunnderstood.....lol just joking this shows the feeling of misguided trust excellent write....

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Lylyanna Pilewski 24 August 2006

Oh no what happend? Lylyanna

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Lesa K 22 August 2006

Painful. You have described the betrayal well.

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Francesca Johnson 10 August 2006

It's all too easy to believe those lies, AJ. How many of us have been caught in those same nets? Nice poem.... Love, Fran xx

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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