You Do Not Come Poem by Satya Prakash

You Do Not Come

Rating: 5.0


Past midnight
When clouds gather in the sky
And shut off the stars,
I can hear the rustling of the wind
Among the leaves
And the regular croaking of the frogs.

In the paddy fields
The fishes swim or rest in muddy pools,
A snake riddles its way through
And the lonely peepul tree
Keeps a constant vigil
(Its leaves shaking silently in anticipation
For the absent virgin moon.

You do not come.
Past midnight
I turn restlessly in my bed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 07 January 2010

Indeed a nice poetic ambience conceived and worded …romantic…but she didn’t come…here this rupture is melancholic rapture… 10 [for ambience] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Satya, thank you for this expressive peice! Love it!

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