You Are My Mirror Poem by Newton Ray Ukwuoma

You Are My Mirror

Rating: 5.0


You are my mirror

Success- is said a driving force to a soul passionate
sudden the passion drains by passing wind of ill fate
why? awhile i never saw it like this before
But burrowing awhile my soul learnt many more
For those who were called champions desire mate
Who, as the mirror, chide their sorrow until compassionate
Though pride attains us all, believe this, our misdemeanour
Might without a mirror our bitterest foe be forevermore

for this search I, one that my ill will show
whose strings touch the portion, eyes denied me know
grief you remains mute yet i can read
A wonderous lesson from your silent face seal`d
and with fervent scrutiny, i have you name and my biro
Have both sign`d and seal`d for you are my mirror

Friday, February 20, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Obinna Eruchie 18 May 2009

passionate poem, well done.

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a well written poem its a great poem....10+++

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Lynda Robson 20 February 2009

A well woven poem, lovely words, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Jake Erkens 20 February 2009

I love this poem. It is very good and well written. I am going to give poem a ten! :)) Wolfkens

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Newton Ray Ukwuoma

Newton Ray Ukwuoma

Onitsha, Anambra State, Nigeria
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