You Are My Dream Fulfilled Poem by Ingibo Benson

You Are My Dream Fulfilled

Rating: 5.0


I wondered how you read my thought and had my very feel.
I envy what you saw and how you made it real. My heart
Feared your boldness was not in me. I urged it still to fly
Above fear. Thy true skill still amazes me and I pray
Time makes me the master of thee, because I practice
Thy every deed and never was I an absentee, for
My heart purposed to be great. Time shall birth my courage yet
In all I will not deny that you are my dream fulfilled.

2: 16 PM,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 June 2011

Incredibly well. Very strong sentiments. Great imagery. Fine poetics. I rated it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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