# # You Are Poem by Sonya Florentino

# # You Are

Rating: 5.0


(response to a poem 'You Are My Life...' by Saadat Tahir)

You are the air
I need to breath
You are the light
I need to see

You are the water
to cleanse my soul
You are my dream
of fields of gold

You are my fire
You are my life
And I-Saadat
Am but your wife!

But I am yours!

I am the half
of your whole

P.S.
Like you Saadat
I play with words
But I know someday
You’ll find Her


© 2009 Sonya Florentino

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Satarupa Rudrapal 13 October 2009

You are the water to cleanse my soul You are my dream of fields of gold I simply loved the lines!

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Sandra Fowler 12 August 2009

'You are my dream of fields of gold'. What a lovely thought. Wonderful that poets can inspire each other. 10, for you. Love, SandraX

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Laurie Hill 04 August 2009

the ultimate love of your life.................

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Sonya Florentino 04 August 2009

that e-hug felt good...you're very welcome...it's no masterpiece but I think it's cute... thanks for inspiring it! e-hug back... :)

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Saadat Tahir 04 August 2009

LOLxx so sweet of u to write a poem...inspired by my poem....wow.... afirst for me i am honoured and thanx u for the time and effort obviously its a masterpiece... ;) and here ten and it goes to my favs and and a and...ofcourse...an e-hug thanx....charming lady... i deeeply apppreciate cheers

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Sonya Florentino

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Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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