You And I Poem by Catherine Rica Cosico

You And I

Rating: 5.0


You and I –
In this astounding
Blaze
We’ll take
Each others hand
And paint our love
In a pallid wall

You and I –
In this enchanting
Flight
We’ll soar high
In unison
Taking parallel lines
As direction

You and I –
In this baffling
Fate
We’ll unravel the riddle
Like allies
And let destiny seize us
To wherever we ought to be

You and I –
In this stiff
Mountain of Everest
We’ll climb the icy terrain
In the vein of an expert
And be on the summit
To have our liberty

You and I -
Is there really you and I?
Made for us in veracity
Or we still have to wait
In eternity?
‘Coz in your eyes I can see
Your dreams of you and me
No way to run
No where to hide
For you have captured my heart
In this vindictive life of mine

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 04 June 2008

ooooohhhh...I like this Catherine, very rich in emotion.. and I loved this.. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''' No way to run No where to hide For you have captured my heart In this vindictive life of mine...................spot on, true and raw talent *10* Stacks of dirty dishes Jon

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Hockey Fan 05 June 2008

I only have one problem with this poem....after i read it once i need to read it another 5 times because i love the imagery and feeling you put in it. I can feel the words charged with emotion. Really nice job...you Catherine get a 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

We are all human beings on this earth. Nice work.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 14 September 2009

‘And let destiny seize us..’ Fantastic line Ten+ dr. sakti

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Twinkle Gajbhiye 24 June 2008

such a romantic poem...i liked it really

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Subbaraman N V 07 June 2008

A great expression of immortal love! Thanks for sharing.

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Ency Bearis 05 June 2008

nice verses , , , , , an A 10 Ency Bearis

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