You..... Poem by hakima khellaf

You.....



you heard my soul
when didn't give me a call

you heard my feeling
when you didn't say anything

i thought you rang my bell
but you just made me chill

as a cold breeze
you made me freeze
in a holy night
you left me fright

tight your motinos, don't be feverish
i have a question, don't be selfish

were that words a big lie?
please tell me because i'm not going to die

why you always forgot,
that i all you got?

but as this way
you will stray
and loose me in the clearest of the day,

you are the one who will lost
because you used every cost
and than i will run fast
to never see your face or give you my trust.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 03 July 2010

but as this way you will stray and loose me in the clearest of the day, nice, , , keep penning and as u learn and improve, , , surely u yourself will feel the differnce... its comendable to make an effort to write in a foreign language....and then poetry.. three cheers

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