You Poem by Lii Taito

You

Rating: 5.0


Totally Sleepless
With thoughts of you on my mind
Is it sin?
Your one of a kind
One Resistance
He's my kin

It's True
You broke through my shell
Can it Be?
But I can't really tell
It's You
Yea Guaranteed

Our Generation
Lovers I see are everywhere
Should I Hide?
Still I've only one love to share
I'm Saying
Dead or Alive

My Luck
It's forever hunting me
It's not new
That feeling i still carry
I'm Stuck
Falling for You

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nooruddeen Mm 27 June 2009

Yes Lii, Sleeplessness is the first change in one's life when love starts and that nights are full of thoughts.it looks you carry it for ages.. hope it will come true, but don't hide. A good love poem with good writing. Noor

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

lovely poem from a young girl! enjoyed reading it.

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

lovely poem from a young girl! enjoyed reading it.

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Alex Lewis 09 July 2009

I prefer darker poems, but this one was a great write!

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Michael Gale 07 July 2009

Falling so far and fast that you are dizzily having nose bleeds. Ha! Ha! Just kidding! Great write. God bless us all-MJG.

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Antonio Valentino 27 June 2009

Very enjoyable. Thanks for posting. Antonio

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