{you} Poem by Lillian Jamison

{you}

Rating: 5.0


You
The mere thought
Sends shivers throughout

You
The feeling of knowing
What love is about

You
Understanding
Loving and kind

You
Everpresent
Within my mind

You
The dream
That came to be

You
The man
Who is loving me

You
Quell me
With your voice

You
Own my heart
I had no choice

You
Touch my soul
So deep

You
I dream of
Whilst I sleep

You
I love deep
As the ocean

You
Possess
My true devotion

You
Cultivate happiness
It grows and grows

You
Full of passion
I lose control

You
Bring to me
Ecstasy

You
I love
So completely

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 February 2008

Melodious, and free-fluxing throughout.Triplet stanzaec choice...crowns this jewel. ~ FjcR ~

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Thad Wilk 06 February 2008

((YOU)) Lillian are a wonderful poetess, love it, thanks for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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