Yeti's Song Poem by LeeAnn Azzopardi

Yeti's Song

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And as I climb the mountain of discontent,
I sing the Yeti's song
Knowing you have decided to leave me here,
The slings of redempation are thrown to my heart
I will be carrying the song of sorrow
Until I climb to the summit
And confess my sadness to the monsters,
So, they can destroy the sin that brought me here

Saturday, June 24, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: day of reconciliation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 24 June 2023

Profound piece.....thanks for sharing......

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2023

This is beautiful ink. Thanks.

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The expectation that Yetis can "destroy" her sins takes the poet to the summit. The reader joins her, automatically. Nice one

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Richard Wlodarski 25 June 2023

GREAT GREAT POEM, LeeAnn! Hope you're able to see my comment!

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Sheeya Hacks 24 June 2023

Very well written poem I liked the flow and essence. Top Marks.

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Michael Cochrane 24 June 2023

Well written LeeAnn excellent x

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David Wood 24 June 2023

Charlotte Bronte once said, 'Even life for me had its gleams of sunshine'. We have to keep putting one step in front of the other, the next corner may open new opportunities.

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