Yesterday Night, I Saw A Dream ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Yesterday Night, I Saw A Dream ~

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Yesterday night, I saw a dream ~
the stars were descending from the sky,
and I was attempting to grasp them,
with my both hands spread out -
In an avaricious attempt to seize as many,
as they illuminated the dark night with their shimmering,
I empathized with those in profound sleep.

Amidst a multitude of shooting stars descending from the sky,
I hastily collected as many as I could
and stowed them away in my pockets,
Then, I beckoned to others to seize them for me.
Perplexingly, the stars vanished upon contact with the earth,
In my eagerness to gather more,
I stumbled and fell to the ground,
And lost my entire collection,
abruptly awaking from my slumber,
my palms were devoid of any celestial remnants,
leaving me to ponder their mysterious disappearance.

Wednesday, May 31, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S H 01 June 2023

There is a typo in second last line. Perfect poem Full Stars with all appreciation.

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M. Asim Nehal 01 June 2023

Thank u so much for pointing out the typo, I corrected it now.

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Sheeya Hacks 01 June 2023

Even dreams reflects human greed. ✨

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Rajan T Renganathan 31 May 2023

No one knows where but stars disappears. Nicely worded poem, deserve all stars.

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