You make all confused
'coz different faces you use
Sometimes ferocious like a tiger
Sometimes spread your web like a spider
You come with a bouquet
But carry a gun in your pocket
I can't understand you
the real man within you
The curtain which you keep
Is just to hurt others so deep
What you gain giving all this pain
But remember soon you will be in chain
You won't win this game
Soon you will lose all the fame
Rini, this Mafia man is a danger to others and himself.++10
My, my Rini, this is such a powerful poem. These are regular occurences in life. There are people with two sides to them. I am reminded of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. I like the ending. No one wins when they play a bad game. Miraculously, my vote button has started to function. A full vote for this poem
You come with a bouquet But carry a gun in your pocket I can't understand you the real man within you........fantastic presentation with wonderful imagination. This poem is a lesson to the people of present society. Thank u dear Rini for sharing this lovely poem.10
Hi Rini, Exquisitely phrased and rhymed. A warning to all those who are two-faced, who hide their real character with maladies intentions. What happens when the mask is removed? Definitely it is going to happen one day. There is a saying, You can not deceive anybody long. Very poignant thought.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The curtain which you keep is just to hurt others so deep Excellent writing Rini Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken