get it out. get it over with.
let them know. let them look amiff.
what I wrote-it is what I feel.
understand: you're not past the peal.
only I know just the flavor.
simply I can fully savor.
you enjoy: even though it's small.
cuz' guess what? ? there's pits in 'em all.
I like it. The mood is definitely there-nice alliteration, and the short sentences make a nice effect. Good and concise, and it sounds like you which is the point after all.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Way to totally flip off everyone, jinnius. Poems are like one's personal diary.