Writhing Soul Poem by Rukesh Yadav

Writhing Soul

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You're gone,
Leaving a piece of your soul,
It's writhing in pain,
Locked in me,
Wriggling in agony,
Take it away,
Or demolish me to dust,
I can't bear to see!

Wednesday, July 1, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 July 2020

Such a nice poem, R. Y. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Rajnish Manga 01 July 2020

This is how departed soul of someone very close to heart can cause void as well as an unbearable pain to those left behind. A very poignant write. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2020

You're gone, Leaving a piece of your soul, It's writhing in pain, Wonderful expressions of loss and pain and sadness in words full of feelings. tony

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