Wow, What A Revenge! Poem by Pranayee Rachamalla

Wow, What A Revenge!

Rating: 5.0


Just because I shared similarities with you,
you snatched my words.
Just because I was part of your event,
you occupied my thoughts.
Only because I liked you,
you grabbed my world!
Just because I loved you,
You fully filled yourself in my feelings,
Since I have started to follow you,
your thoughts started to haunt me!
just because we have ' NO' between our letters,
You can't say no to every question of mine!
Just when I started to wait for you,
you started ignoring me,
Just because I killed my ego and kidnapped my attitude,
You got the chance to steal my heart;
Only because I broke your expectation,
Just because I said that you have the key to my heart,
You cleverly broke my heart! Wow, What a revenge!

Tuesday, February 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: revenge
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kishore Kumar Das 08 February 2017

It is not the proper case for revenge! World is so vast......let us not compete with anybod yelse except 'self'....but your poem deals with a 'micro' approach for revenge in a skilled way... the common syndrome found in a lively manner with your lovely lines......a perfect 10 for you...

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Thanks a lot sir for your kind words.....

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