Wounds And Scars Poem by oxir canada

Wounds And Scars



One by one
Our days pass
I wiped and collected
the broken glass we made
Even i know
i let it slipped
Try to put back the pieces
Hoping i could bring back the past
but what i get are more
wounds and scars.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Absent Wryta 08 September 2008

Yes, good write. Nice use of broken glass as a metaphor

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Ency Bearis 08 September 2008

a nice metaphor...to mend the broken love/life...good write Ency Bearis

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