Would You? Poem by hayley fleming

Would You?

Rating: 5.0


Can i take you with me,

Would you even come?

Lay with me till we can see

The rising of the sun..

Take your hand in mine

Lay it softly on my skin,

Lose our minds along with time,

Till i feel you deep within..

You satisfy my hunger

Your taste upon my lips,

The way your body flows with mine,

The motion of our hips..

Now the mornings breaking free

With the early morning sun,

Can i take you with me,

Would you even come?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shadow Girl 23 August 2011

wow that was beautiful and emotive..loved it...great write...10! SG

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Shadow Girl 23 August 2011

wow that was beautiful and emotive..loved it...great write...10! SG

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