Worm Poem by Ripper Jones

Worm

Rating: 5.0


Walk a little.
Round the corner and up a bit
There it is
The strange round kerbstone
Alone and unplaqued
Along with the other curved stones
Fitting together like jelly molds
To make a small arch
And inbetween like an ink line
Where the compo is
Little arteries of moss
And earth conquered grey
Flowing across toward
The chequered hop-scotch pavement
The entry for the earth-churning
Home of the worms and ants

Children cut a worm in half
And both halves writhe
Writhe like a murderer on the noose
Trying to shake himself loose.

Monday, January 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,symbolism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2016

Experiments with nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Kim Barney 04 January 2016

And usually, when you cut a worm in half, both sides can keep on living. Not so with us people.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 January 2016

powerful observations and a peculiar way of writing which is very much original. thank you. tony

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 March 2016

Heartiest Congratulations on Poem of the Day as also excellent ability to observe minutest detains and their reproduction in the form of a wonderful verse.10 points.

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Susan Williams 28 March 2016

Excellent. Perfectly sketched scene and the closure was abrupt and painful. I remember as a child that when shoveling around in the dirt I sometimes cut a worm in half and was consoled by the thought that now there were two worms living there instead of just one. I hope that was true. What is true is that you have HUGE talent!

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Kelly Kurt 28 March 2016

Deftly written. Very enjoyable

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2016

Inbetween with the muse of nature! Thanks for sharing.

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Sofia Kioroglou 11 February 2016

An exquisite piece of writing! A worthy 10! Nicely done

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Ripper Jones 12 February 2016

Thanks so much Sofia.

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Ripper Jones 12 February 2016

Thankyou kindly Sofia. Love your poems.

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