Words Poem by Rini Shibu

Words

Rating: 5.0


Words are like sand grains
In this vast deserted life
Where it forms dunes and oasis
to bloom your mind

Monday, March 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,spiritual,words
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 05 March 2018

Work of an active imagination, well encapsulated and elegantly brought forth with insight. A lovely creation Rini. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Robert Murray Smith 17 June 2018

A clever universal write.++10

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Seamus O Brian 07 March 2018

Very clever, the use of typically opposing thoughts such as deserted and life, and dunes with oasis and blooming. Such strong contrast grabs the reader's attention and makes him (her) think. Very interesting picture you have painted here, Rini.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks for your compliments Seamus..! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 March 2018

Beautiful philosophical poem nicely presented. Thanks.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thank you so much for your visit..much appreciated

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Nudershada Cabanes 07 March 2018

Wonderfully penned poem Rini. Words as grains of sand to form oasis in mind.10

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thank Nuder for visiting this poem..! !

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Lamar Cole 06 March 2018

Great poem about words.

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Rini Shibu 08 March 2018

Thanks a lot Lamar Rini

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