Words are like sand grains
In this vast deserted life
Where it forms dunes and oasis
to bloom your mind
Very clever, the use of typically opposing thoughts such as deserted and life, and dunes with oasis and blooming. Such strong contrast grabs the reader's attention and makes him (her) think. Very interesting picture you have painted here, Rini.
Wonderfully penned poem Rini. Words as grains of sand to form oasis in mind.10
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Work of an active imagination, well encapsulated and elegantly brought forth with insight. A lovely creation Rini. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.