Woman Poem by Bharati Nayak

Woman

Rating: 4.9


Me -a woman
I am to be loved
Not to be used.

Me-a flower
I am to be adored
And adorned
Not to be shredded.

Me-Tenderness
To be handled with care
Not to be trampled.

Me-Love
To be paid back in love
Not with authority.

Me - A Dream
To be nurtured
To be realised
Not to be broken

Me- A Promise
Promise for the future
Keep me
In your heart's care.

Friday, March 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 07 April 2017

Beautifully expressed. Yes, a woman deserves all this. A woman blossoms fully only when she is treated with respect n care. A befitting tribute to womanhood. A10

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Susan Williams 26 March 2017

There is a multitude of types of women in the world from passive to proactive, from women libbers to content at home mommies.... but I truly believe from the bottom of my romantic heart that women's heart beat best when we are treated like treasured flowers and a blessed dream and a past, present, and future promise of all things good. A gorgeous Bharati poem full of tender loving truth. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Khairul Ahsan 02 April 2017

Loved your comment. Nice. Agreed.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2017

It is a best ode on woman so nicely depicted. Attractive penmanship. I like this poem very much. The last stanza is more meaningful. Top ten, thanks.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 March 2017

I am to be loved! ! Positiveness! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nabakishore Dash 12 November 2021

Excellent.All men should read it.

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A womanly anxiety nicely written. She wants to be safe and loved.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 January 2018

You have made it very clear to all the male chauvinist in your perfect little poem. Thanks Bharati

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Rini Shibu 13 June 2017

woman are to be loved and cared and well expressed in your poem...

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Queeny Gona 08 May 2017

Woman in general is emblem of love and delicacy! She is to be loved, cared and be honored. However, every now and then we see woman being mistreated, abused. This read of yours invokes the readers to treat woman good and special.

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