With-Without Poem by Bharati Nayak

With-Without

Rating: 5.0


Without touching
You touched me
Without binding
You bound me
Without surrounding
You surround me.
Without seeing
You see me
Without hearing
You hear me.

You are seen, yet unseen
You are pain, you are pleasure
You are far, you are near.
You are in me, you are in the Universe,
Oh Love
I salute thee
I salute thee.

Thursday, January 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 January 2019

Without touching, God touches in magical hand and his Grace enters within us. God has greater motivational force. We feel this in inner core. God is pleasure for all and he is a great pain remover. He takes us our pain and gives us unlimited joy. Our God is very kind. A deeply philosophical poem is beautifully penned. This is an excellent sharing...10

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Bharati Nayak 21 January 2019

Many many thanks and my gratitude for reading my poem and highly valuable comment.

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Love brings a feeling that both the loving and the loved are very near though physically far away. Magic of love!

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Sekharan Pookkat 02 July 2019

seeing self recognizing and accepting THEE seems wonderful!

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Bharati Nayak 02 July 2019

Thank you Sekharan Pookkat for your kind read and valuable feedback.

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Denis Mair 14 March 2019

Through the words one sense your heart reaching...This lines put me into a meditative state...I feel that what you reach for is somehow present in the act of reaching.

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Bharati Nayak 15 March 2019

Thnak you Denis Mair for your insightful comment.I like what you say- 'what you reach for is somehow present in the act of reaching.' (Report)

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C F 14 March 2019

A simple yet emotional and heart felt prayer-like poem for someone you truly love. Quite a refreshing read! Thank you very much for sharing.

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Bharati Nayak 15 March 2019

Thank you Chito Faustino for resding and commenting on this poem.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 12 February 2019

A beautiful poem I like to think it is about God. Written meaningfully and superbly expressed. Kudos. So nice to read from your inking again, Pleez do comment my newest poem too titled, 'when life was really child's play'

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