Winter Cracks Poem by james watkin

Winter Cracks

Rating: 5.0


Winter cracks; revealing a new
Layer to existence.
Nor does it stop there! Which iced lid
Sun forcibly back-slid

On what flaps down on, thin-sheeted
Has a metallic sheen
Beneath its own rippling surface
Part concealed is this place.

Head-leant into, but not too far
For what's too fishy slimed.
With jar to fil, curious-eyed
Of the tadpole-swam, spied.

Monday, July 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 July 2020

A well crafted wonderful piece. Simply astounding...10+++

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