Winter Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Winter

Rating: 5.0


Oh to see the sky with just a touch of
pink, that sets the heart to dream, and
your mind to think... Of the scarlet flowers
down by the road side, the yellow daisies
and the carnations so vibrant, as if dipped
in bright multi colors of paint or ink. And a
nip of honey suckle to taste, with some
spearmint tea to sip and drink. Sitting out on
the porch swing glider, along side the sparkling
creek, listening to the redbirds soulfully singing
and the chickadees, merrily tweet. While watching
the robins hop along, engaged in their own dance
and song. The mesmerizing beauty of life, , , the heart
reflects and ponders on. As the mind thoughtfully hopes, , ,
Maybe spring will be, in not so very long...

Monday, January 17, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: winter,dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2022

The mesmerizing beauty of life, , , the heart reflects and ponders on and on. It's a captivating piece of work with fabulous imagery...just beautiful.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 January 2022

I am another person wh agrees with Robert Bravo!

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Susan Williams 18 January 2022

oh, yes! you give us a breath of spring with this delightful poem--and oh how we needed its fragrant words on this cold winter--5 stars and put on my fav list

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2022

The mesmerising beauty of life -----so wonderfully presented like a painting.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 January 2022

Spring is on its way to meet us with open arms.....Thank you Rebecca. Stay blessed.....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 December 2022

A wonderful poem worth revisiting. This write could tame the harshness of winter. Its crystalline images just soothe the spirit. A great read, Becca. Thank you for sharing.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 January 2022

A poem that gives us hope, beauty and wonders that make life worth living for. So beautifully expressed and depicted. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 January 2022

The compelling images and beautiful poetic expressions embedded in this marvelous write make us feel the gentle breeze of spring. So soothing and uplifting, taking away the darkness brought by winter.

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Jayne Davies 20 January 2022

Beautifuly worded! Well done!

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Unnikrishnan E S 19 January 2022

Magically beautiful, Becca. Top score and onto myfav

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