! Window Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Window

Rating: 3.0


Window of life opens
and a smile on Ocean’s face
waves bang all around,
dawn pleasant and calm
footprints of earth
on day’s petals....
a funicular climbs
upwards to mountains peak
in equal variation climbs
up and down
a furnace burns from
hearts of provoked
battlefields....
corpses mortified,
souls chased out on
inhuman cerebral
concocts....
onlookers watch merely
slams and smashes
from either hostiles
saviors of an ancient
civilization’s longing
determined equilibriums.
Instrumental human
calculations misfire on
unpredictable ends and
a heart smiles here along with
ocean and cosmic universe...
stay away waves from
this window and dont
try to tame any further....



August 9,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gayatri Nambiar 09 August 2008

this is a classy poem and you see let waves bang you write for me.. i like this one 10 and more writing this Gai

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Ramesh T A 10 August 2008

World happenings we watch from the window But we can't help as we are in fetters by fate!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 02 October 2008

A nice poem with wonderful metaphors. Love it.

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Mamta Agarwal 09 September 2008

stiking imagery, heart rending- unusual imagery- impressive.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 August 2008

A web of cerebral concocts with unimaginative imagery

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Kesav Easwaran 12 August 2008

angry waves disguised in smile banging on your poem window...window calm? introspective...good 10/10

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Indira Renganathan 12 August 2008

I agree with Mr.Ramesh as war and violence have become an usual trend.Pray for world peace.10 and more

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